eyes captured in a black velvet night,
Raindrops like wet crystals fall from the skies.
Inside my shell my heart feels tight,
I gaze deep into your emerald green eyes.
Drips wash over your silky skin,
and slowly move over your flesh.
My heart beat is weakening,
as you move your hand across my chest.
The rain pours harder and freeze me still,
You pull closer and feel over my hips.
For so long I hid what I feel,
Now this temptaion is tasting your lips.
In your kiss all the heavens scream,
your hands move setting fire to me.
My spirit coming undone seam by seam,
as the rain covers over your body.
My soul is on fire, My heart in a cage,
Watery temptress holding my fate,
The pouring rain almost in rage,
In this rainstorm it all takes shape.
Our kisses washed into the ground,
We lay under the chalkly moon,
In the rain our love held safe and sound,
Now the watery crystals our etrunal tomb.
Author notes
3.The rain thing i chose
A contest entry
- 4 Options: First Love, Darkness addict, Rain, or your Almost Lover by Rain-Shot-Rose.
600 points, ended September 7, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Is it getting hot in here or what? Lol wow, love it sweetie. Great imagery, emotion, I could feel everything you wrote. I just love your poems Becky. Awesome job sweets!
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Thankyou so much honey
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Wow
this was...beautiful...i absolutely loved it! you're imagery was just what i was looking for...i loved the passion i could feel.. you definitaly have a good chance of winning my friend
thanks for entering i wish you luck in my contest!
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Thankyou so much
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