Light
It guides our way
through darkness
Brings a child security
from monsters under the bed
Its the brightness
we wake up to in the morning
Its there at our calling
In the end its still
the beauty of
Light
Author notes
Revised from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4538151
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Love the seriousness, missed with childhood haunts...
Quite beautiful.
Good luck and thank you for entering. -
Wow! That is amazing, I feel like it is perfect and I couldn't offer any criticism to it. You really developed the ideas well and the beauty of light at the end - great finish!
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I like this one better, the flow is easier, and the language a bit more descriptive... :-)
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