I confess it now
Because even darkness
Can’t hide me anymore
I confess my sins to you
You who is up there watching
With sleepless eyes
With an open heart
A heart beyond the shape of all ours
You led me many times
And again I came back
Sinning endlessly
And every time I ask forgiveness
And you grant me
Shamelessly I disappoint you
Over and over
Even darkness rejects me now
And you still hold me
In your big, kind palms
Forgiving me,but I confess
I’m sorry that I am a human
That never learned to love you
Forgive me, lord
Author notes
Of course it's not personal, I am completly the opposite of this, we all sin but sins differ from each other. Anyway!
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A contest entry
- the darkness... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended August 27, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You won a silver and no one read this? This poem is freaking touchy! Wow! It drew me into it, making me feel what you want us to feel in this poem. Strong words! Beautifully penned! Keep it up!


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Ah..this is something very touchy and honest piece herewith..I love it...well done..and thanksfor entering my contest...


