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Trick or Treat

halloween once again
time to set upon costume tasks
my bro and i get ready to dress
but just then Dad asks
"Can we take a picture, a before one"?
"then we'll take one when you're done".
so we glance at the camera
he snaps the shutter but just one

We finish getting ready
and out the door we trick and treat
from house to house we see him
this zombie boy follows our feet
he never speaks he only smiles
and tags along all night
and when we're all finished
he disappears from sight

trick or treating comes and goes
we tally up our candy shared
Dad enters the room, he looks pale
I ask him "what's wrong daddy?"
"you look scared".
from his hand comes the photo
we glance at the picture in disbelief
as my hair stands on end
we stare at each other in grief
unable to give an explanation
to what it is we see
for where we were just us two
the photo now shows the zombie boy
in between us, number three

*insert scream here*

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  • penman gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Excellent

    Oh my you sure did a great job with this one. Such has plenty of the right dark feelings. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • aboomer silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    whoooo - great take on that picture! So unique!! I loved your twist at the end!!! Zombie boy...lolol....loved it!
    best wishes in your contest.


  • solitarytear
    August 25, 2008
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    wonderful

    this one is great......halloween indeed good take on the pic and thanks for the chills

  • aaaaaaaa
    August 25, 2008

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    creeeeeepy. I like it. are you serious about the middle one being the zombie boy. it looks like the one on the right kinda. but it basically just looks like a normal kid. hum. well good write. g'luck in contest.


    • Darkwell
      August 25, 2008
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      you gotta believe maybe he was a normal kid before he was a zombie it didnt scare you (._.)

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