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Love’s Veracity

The allure of feeling special,
being chosen from the many by one,
resonates deep within your dreams
exploring what your heart has won.

Skin as enticing as silken sheets,
a rosy glow upon each cheek,
a beauty like the rising sun
exquisite and unique.

A magic smile and sassy laugh
embodied in a free spirit,
combining raw sexuality
with an irrepressible wit.

Her kisses tickle your libido
tasting both erotic and rare,
un-sheltering her cloistered heart
she releases the love waiting there.

The generosity of a saint,
confirming love’s veracity,
the embodiment of all that's good
she fills you to capacity.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 25, 2008

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    This is very lovely; so charming and engaging...thanks so much for your entry and good luck in my contest lol


  • nevadapoet
    August 24, 2008

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    I love your style...it has a musical tone to it, kind of majestic. I like also how honest you are with your words...nicely done.


  • SpoonsKill
    August 24, 2008

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    GOOD POEM

    I liked it, realy nice and a good read :-) i liked the part as follows the best:"skin as enticing as silk sheets, sports a rosy glow on each cheek, a beauty like the rising sun, extraordinarily unique" amazing poem with a good choice of words


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    Yes..you are writing this poem by the pen of your heart..and this is the love in words...well done..and thanks for sharing it...


  • nilav
    August 24, 2008

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    the magic of love is here...from being someone special ,longing and lust, and the goodness...enjoyed it


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Beautifully Expressed!

    What a well done piece for this contest my friend.
    Thanks for sharing here your talented pen. All the best to ya!

    Peace, Timothy

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