I grit my teeth
and flash a pained grimace
a smile all think it must be
But the one smiling is not me...
My eyes are dancing
fluttering; active
attempting to see
But that's not me...
My brain flashes answers
conversation struck
my mind attempting to believe
But a believer is not me...
My heart acts all happy
chirping to my friends
Glowing full of glee
But the jolly heart's not me...
How can i smile when your gone
and i am incomplete?
How can i look at anything when every time i focus my eyes
you are all i see?
How can i reason with myself
when you're always on my mind?
How can i feel anything
when i have to block the pain you cause?
This is me,
the one who can't
smile, see, think, or feel
without you around
oh
are you happy now?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very good..
much better, nice emotion without being to morbid or depressing. and yes i love you and no i'm not happy not till tuesday.
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very good poem this one had nearly any flaws and was very near to the heart you ask very good questions here and make valid point
much love
--kat -
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lovely, tender poem that asks important questions.
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