How wonderful you are with child,
now a mommy to be.
To know this life you carry,
is part you and me.
Each day the child grows within,
for this new life one day.
And a light so tiney starts within,
watch that piece of your soul at play.
The light you share none can compare,
for its a mothers gift forever and a day.
Its the light for when God calls us home,
it shall show us the way.
So honey with this blessing you have been given,
hold it dear and teach it well.
Give it all the knowledge of Gods stories and glories,
and a love you know yourself.
For within that little angel,
that pice of soul you share.
Is a gift like no other,
that none can compare.
"congradulations"
Author notes
Love Patty
A contest entry
- ♥I'm gonna be a Mommy!♥ by Kitsune Kyuuketsuki.
300 points, ended September 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very good poem this is just a very lovely poem
best of luck
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very good poem this is just a very lovely poem
best of luck
--kat -
Simply beautiful!! Best of luck in the contest!! (And congrats to the Mommy-to-be.)
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truly to be a mother is to 'share the light of love from within...'this is is such an awesome poem...very heartfelt...and I think all moms-to-be would certainly like this piece!!!
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This is a beautiful and heart touching poem. Great job! Blessings, Patty
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What a great job you did on this one! I love this. Something in this one, I found to be quite soothing tonight. Maybe it is the fact of all the stress I have been under, not sure. but I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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A priceless write. A most precious gift you have given with your tender words. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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So honey with this blessing you have been given,
hold it dear and teach it well.
Give it all the knowledge of Gods stories and glories,
and a love you know yourself.
Well Missy! Another fine write from my fellow Texan!
I love the softness of the message contained here, and you show your love through every line. Wonderful.
My regards to the mommy. Very cool. I love being a Mom, neverr wanted to be anything but.
Moms make this world a better place, welcome to our unique club
Blessings always, to each of you lovely ladies,
and Bravo Poetess, you've written another mastrpiece.
Love,
jin
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