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Bird Haiku chain


His dawn serenade
will gently wake wood's chorus
lumberjacks at work.


A cold wind ruffles
feathers on the spotted breast
summer's Requiem.

Summer slips away
and the song thrush will follow
the sound of silence.

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Your third haiku was flat awesome. I thought that one was tremendous