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Because No one does.

A smile, a laugh.
You start to feel better.

(I always say it....)

floating amoung gold-glitter stars,
the warnings, the trials fade.

(You never even realise)

You sit outside below the shining sun,
you think 'surely i'm better...'

(not until later)

You keep smiling, you keep speaking.
but they slowly turn to lies.

(when it finally clicks)

and now you're lost,
back in the memories....

(it's too late)

You lie... till they run out of questions.
You lie... till you run out of excuses.



I say everyone loves me... because no one does.

Author notes

This. is. CRAP. dear lord, i am shocked at the state of this poem, i shall be editting it quite extensively later.... right now i clearly am not in the correct writing mindset.......

.....bah.

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  • mydarlinghamburger
    August 25, 2008

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    no, I liked it...

    i can't really think of anything else to say, so i may comment again later

    Love, Lila xoxo