Last night, I dreamt a way to heaven,
when some twinkling stars gazing at me.
But the path was so green
with brown layers in between.
Trees were on both sides
like gaurds on the gate.
calling me to walk more to reach
where life ends in niche.
A contest entry
- Quicky photo inspired by Meroza.
500 points, ended August 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Something that came in mind after seeing picture # 6
Comments
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Oh this one is brilliant, a really cute touch to the prompt! Makes me want to go back to the road and imagine it is indeed a path to heaven.
Well done and best of luck -
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Thanks
Thanks for appreciation.
I am looking to write one more one more picture...just looking to imagine something.
once again thanks,
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