Children...
Need I say more
They are all innocent Angels when born
But its sad
That they grow up so fast!
however,
The magic they bring into our lives
Will always be treasured
For if we listen and watch...
All babies can teach us lessons too
Of Loving each other,
Trust and Beleiving in their imaginary friends.
If we as adults,
Could live in their worlds
We might become their Student...
Not their Teacher!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- ♥I'm gonna be a Mommy!♥ by Kitsune Kyuuketsuki.
300 points, ended September 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice and thourough poem i love the theme
best of luck
--kat -
This was so amazing! great advise and insight.
Assuming you have raised some kids because it so true!
my son this last year got me to snap out of alot of depression by saying one thing to me (he is almost 18)
but at that time he was boarding seventeen.
He look at me in tears calmly walked up his steps to his room, Stopped and said, mom say this with me..
"I- not events-have the power to make myself happy."
out of the mouth of babes we raised huh?
Beautiful write almost spirtual or is it?
~Lisa~
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This was beautiful...Children can indeed teach us many things, problem is that as we get older, we forget that through the eyes of innocence lies truth. Slight error in the word "beleiving" should read "believing"
Bravo 
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wow a brilliant poem to lean in life you must be a pupil first then a teacher childrean can teach us so much about ourselves i loved line seven though to th last line and yes the picture is wonderful good luck in the contest my friend
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