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A baby name or two

You need a baby name you say,

Lets see what I can come up with.

 

What about Crystal?

Bad idea, it rhymes with pistol.

 

But Chris sounds nice?

Both a girl and a boy name, no lies!

 

I would pick Kat,

'cause I love cats.

 

But Michael?

No,that one should be recycled.

 

I am a fan of Johnny,

Just dress him up as a bunny!

 

Something rare perhaps like Luna?

Or maybe even rarer like Fortuna!

 

Or majestic like William?

Oh that reminds me of my favorite song from Wig Wam!

 

I hope I was at help,

No don't lie I really wasn't.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • ml12
    September 4, 2008

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    Hood-Wink

    This was quite funny and it shows a little of you (I think) which is good. I liked the brief stanzas and the underlying structure. Bravo!


  • GypsyEyes
    September 2, 2008

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    luna would have to be my favorite because well i loved the cat on sailor moon. thank you so much for entering my Baby Name contest best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox

    • Meroza
      September 2, 2008
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      Who dosen't love that!

      Thanks for the comment.


  • CatQueen248
    August 29, 2008

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    I liked how you actually fit your baby names into a poem. Not many people did that. I also like the name Kat because I love cats too. I also like Luna, it's very pretty. I agree with the name Michael. My uncle has that name, my brother, and now my fiance has that name too, lol. It really should be recycled. Very creative poem.


    • Meroza
      August 29, 2008
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      Thank you so for your comment and I am glad you liked what you did.
      It was fun writing this poem.


  • ProudMomma
    August 24, 2008

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    this was really fun! I really liked it! I like where you took this contest maybe you didn't help but i found some humor in it and it was great! Keep on penning

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