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Emotions

You keep them locked away behind bars
almost like they've been sentenced to eternity
but what happens if they want to escape
Will they hold you responsible
for not giving them a fair trial
Figure out what they did wrong,
then seek a jury and send them to court
They don't deserved to be punished
it's not their fault you wont express them.

Its about unexpressed emotions. Tell me what you think.

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  • xeroabyss II
    February 26

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    What's even worse then them escaping, is when they die, and begin to rot and fester, contaminating and tainting everything, until all is fetid and vile inside and out....


  • alexandra.
    August 29, 2008

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    I like the message here, although it could do with expanding, it just feels a little short, you know?

    Love the last two lines, btw. Really really good