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Distant Cravings




Goblet of blue flakes fluttering around gloom,
a moon hidden inside breast; fled to each breath,
neither an invisible pain or sighs can't stop;
wings of longing for the drops of unseen tears;
in sounds interspersed hitting my heart wires;
to think of, whether should groan or sing sadness.

The lyre in breaking casts, a more sublime,
pillars of love's witness turns in monotonous,
hands focusing an ivy as an escape to gaze backward,
sometimes a dream looked of a future; collapsing hopes,
flashes of affection nonchalant rocked on vile waves
to split an emotion, composing honey, to flow on slope.

I threw a name more to shore without these waves,
depending on zephyr celestial, crashed or floats,
in mild scream noises running under the shadows
as an aqua whispers uncertainty; in flow of time,
at the foot of shudders as a fire trembling in night
to utter regrets in piercing darkness of my instincts.









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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Beautiful poetry..though sad, it's so wonderfully written. Best of luck in the contest!

    Linda


  • Rclane gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    Thank you so much for your entry of such a poetic weave of words. Luck to you in contest.