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One Summer

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A getaway

For three days

Escape the craze

Of everyday

Packed  our stuff

Headed out

To living rough

And all about

Up the streams

To fish and cruise

By nature's means

On our canoes

Come the nights

A chill in air

Slept so right

Without a care

As the end

Our journey way

With all my friends

That summer's day...

copyright 2008 vduna

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Like your short lines for easy reading and flow..Easy to understand for a young judge judging.Enjoyable read, and lovely write!

  • Going Forever
    August 24, 2008

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    This poem goes with the picture very well!!! I just finished judging my other contest so now I have to judge this one!! yay, finally lol

    Well Done!!

    Best wishes in the contest!!!


    Georgia