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"Golden Pen"

I'm here!
With my golden pen
To scroll some new
On the mirror of heart
My words are soft
And often melt
Lose their style
Like my soul
Again they shine!
Again they wilt
Like my eyes!
What I want is
To creat a sorrow
In a bowl of joy
With the heat of hope
But without the light
It's all a blend
And I do not know
Should I stay or go
With all my love
And a thousand tears
That are left behind
So I'm here....
With ny "Golden Pen"

Author notes

I just wrote it like this! Hope that's not worst!

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  • UntilxIxDie
    September 13, 2008
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    i think that was really cool

  • crimson-tears
    August 25, 2008

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    oh my .............

    gosh that was awsome but it kinda confused me but i figered(spellcheck)it out and after i got it it was really cool


  • kamranAslam
    August 25, 2008
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    hey golden pen.weldone sister.great poetry surely.