Within our circle of life
There are many phases you see
The first is being born
Then naming you and me
Then we become a toddler
Standing and falling down
Taking our first steps
Sometimes with tears or a frown
After a few short years
We've reached our adult life
Filled with love and marriage
Children and maybe some strife
Now we're in our latter years
About three fourths of the Circle used
We haven't lived the circle full
Or you wouldn't be reading this muse
A contest entry
- Circles - BIG POINTS!! by CelticQueen.
1500 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Cute ending. Thanks for entering. cq
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this is very true about this virus that we all call life this a very wise and proving poem!!
best of luck
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Thank you kat for reading and commenting on my poem...Katie
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Humm..this is a very true sketch of the life you have portrayed with your poetic wonder..well done..and thanks for sharing it...
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Thank you very much Prabhu for reading my poem and commenting on it. Your comment is greatly appreciated..Katie
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Another wise and lovely write. Time goes by so quickly, from diapers to maturity...blink. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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Thank you Samplette for your kind comment on my poem. Katie
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