Circles,
Orbs of sight
Witnesses of wrong and right.
Circles,
Rings of gold
Eternities to have and hold.
Circles,
Smoke rings in the air
From people who do not care.
Circles,
Dancing without care
'Round the maypole standing there.
Circles,
Ring-Around-the-Rosies
All fall down upon the posies.
Circles,
Hold my hand and sing
Round and round the fairy ring.
Circles
All of life we spend
Hoping there never is an end!
A contest entry
- Circles - BIG POINTS!! by CelticQueen.
1500 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this poem make you feel? What was your general impression?
Comments
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Lots of things done in circles. Thanks for entering. cq
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Wow,
So many definitions to the circle.
Great poem indeed.
Reminds me of when i would dance around the poles
of my grandmothers carport as a child.
Lovely write.
-Mandi
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this was a very good poem and has very good diversity in the circles you did a great job thinking of all the many ways that circles can be
best of luck
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Interesting thought provoking write. Like the last stanza especially as it relates to the idea that circles have neither a beginning or end. Best of luck in the contest with this piece!!
. Rewarded 4
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I love the rhythm and flow of this. and such good example of circles. and lovely rhyme. good job
best luck in the contest
Rhonda
. Rewarded 4
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Hello. Your examples of circles I like, this write has a fractal feel to it to me, "as above so below", due to the observation of circles turning up in so many ways, and not just in nature but in cultures and different times. I wish you well in the contest. My regards.
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wonderful
this brings me back to my childhood it is youthful and exciting good job grandmother
<3 chicken pie
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