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all of the moon

(///////////the moon is a symbol to\\\\\\\\)
(/////////me when i look at it i feel\\\\\\\\)
(////////like i'm looking at you where\\\\\\\\)
(///////ever you are. i know it sounds so\\\\\\\)
(//////weird, but it's true. i see it, i see\\\\\)
(/////you, and then i start to cry because i'm\\\\)
(////not with you. i love you so much i feel bad\\\\)
(///because i left you there. but i know i will be\\\)
(//back with-in time. but i long to be in your arms.\\)
(/and when i do come to you the first thing i will look\)
{|for is the moon. not in the sky, but in your beautiful|}
(\hazel eyes. if i don't find it i know i'm not missing/)
(\you. if i don't see it i don't care because i'll see/)
(\you. so when i find my way there, will you be there/)
(\\for me. the moon is always there. when i look at//)
(\\\it i wonder if you're looking at it too. when///)
(\\\\i am alone and i have nothing on my mind i////)
(\\\\will be looking at the moon. but if i do/////)
(\\\i will probablly start crying. so i can//////)
(\\\look just not that long. because when///////)
(\\\i look at the moon all i can see is////////)
(\\you. and i miss you as it is. when/////////)
(\\\\\i look at the moon all i see is////////)
(\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\you/////////////////////)

i hate looking at the moon cause i hate crying.

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  • brittanymoreland
    September 2, 2008

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    this is a really good one.... your girl is lucking to have you in her life... hopefully she can see it