desire growing spirit
yearning and yearning
spirit growing desire
pain reminding lessons
growing and growing
lessons reminding pain
loneliness yearning mistakes
reminding and reminding
mistakes yearning loneliness
pain reminding lessons
growing and growing
lessons reminding pain
desire growing spirit
yearning and yearning
spirit growing desire
Author notes
i just tried a thing where the stanzas are mirrors and the whole poem is a mirror about how we have a desire an that leads to pursuing it which can lead to heartache or pain then back to desiring something else but like life goes in circles
A contest entry
- Circles - BIG POINTS!! by CelticQueen.
1500 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was an interesting form and a little different spin on the circle of life theme that I've seen so much of in this contest. Thanks for entering. cq
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this poem is also very true it seems like life can just float on and never give us a break
best of luck
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Oh I did enjoy this life is a circle that just keeps on going no matter how many problems there are it continues without a break sometimes I just wish it would take a little nap so I can catch my breath
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