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Love-Light

Light emits from your fingertips
As they outline my waiting lips
Electric caresses,your finger compresses
Sounds that my mouth expresses
As we meld through the night
It feels oh so right
Now I know that your
Heart's full of light!

Author notes

Very different stlye for me. Hope you like it!

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    quite nice...

    Good luck and thank you for entering