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A Question From The Mind of my Alter Ego

Light.
Somewhere out there.
There is light.
It keeps the darkness at bay.
Chases away the shadows of my fears.
Shining brightly.
A sentinel of all that is sane.
Why can't I see the
Light?

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    Humm, interesting, poweful sense of awarness.

    Good luck and thnak you for entering.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 25, 2008
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    Nice write. Short, but powerful.