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"Farewell Oh Life!"

Her lips agar!
A broken scream escapes her throat,
The soul sighs
But she hasn't depart!

Eyes telling deep blue tales
Breath escapes her lunges once more
Hands raised dunno asking what!
And the wind around does roar

Her lips are dry with thirst
Shattered gold leaves in her fist
Face decorated with scars
Dressed red in blood, hidden in mist!

Then as last breath said to wind:
"Farewell! Dear life, now I go away"
Ah! The frail body turns to corpse
Now in the graveyard with peace she'll lay

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 14
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    Very dark but i do like the structure of the poem


  • Glenn
    September 17, 2008

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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!

    Hey, its a good sensitive painful poem.......with so much expressions.

    So what can i say this is a GOOD POem.

    Well Written


  • kamranAslam
    August 24, 2008

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    hey dont think like that.but u know i m really impressed with ur poetry.its just great and nice words.