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Never

She'll never guess!
Oh, such a mess...
Her cupboard there
is now quite bare.

I ate the candy
it was handy
and quite forgotten
though not rotten.

All minty green
the best I've seen
and cherry red
so good, they said

and they are right
oh, what a sight
sweets so yummy...
in my tummy!

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  • Melodies
    August 25, 2008

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    A candy thief! Oh, the memories! Candy is handy for Tommy and Mandy. Love the fun in your poem... sounds like kids talking.


  • Riamh
    August 24, 2008
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    A lovely poem. Thanks for entering. Best of luck in the contest.
    Slayer