Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Eloping






Railing's cold concrete smooth
against porcelain skin; like liquid
flowing ebony hair against the
ivory pillars- songs play in the
distance; creates chills upon bare arms.

A wedding gown and thrumming heart,
they chase dreams down paths in the
light of the moon- eloping love in
enveloping darkness; waves crash in
ringing ears and smiles part

the angry seas...







Author notes

Photo cred: unknown

A contest entry

Leave me thoughts:

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 25, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    You write so pretty..well done and best of luck!

    Linda


  • Rclane gold member
    August 24, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for your entry. Nicely done, sweet flow. Luck to you in contest. Pic was a google search