Crying out to you God, just today,
please help me to believe I did say.
As tears of rain blurred my eyes,
vision's of weeping at the cross cast out all lies.
Author notes
I chose the option of, THE CROSS!!!!
A contest entry
- Christian Themed Quicke/5 lines by Carly Pop.
300 points, ended August 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yes have you cried out to the Lord to just help you to believe again in Heaven after losing a child, can you just imagine???
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thank you for your great entry
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Deeply emotion write in such a few words sis! I felt your anguish and prayers..
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He will........
cast out the lies of the devil telling you you cannot go on, trying to ake you from God. Kelle God will not let this happen becuase you are his child and he is the one carrying you through right now...if not for his love you may not even be here right now with us...so think about that when you wonder how you are making through from one day to the other...It Is GOD!!! He loves you and so do I!!!Great job writing so much in five lines!!!AWESOME!!!Toni~~
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Heartfelt
As my own tear drops lay on my breakfast table, I send my love and pray for comfort and God's strength and empowerment over you!
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Beautifully done, no more need be said.
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Excellent
So much depth to this poem hun! Great choice of options. A daily battle of faith expressed with such intensity. I love it. Don
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Lovely write,sis...God sees your heart, and knows your pain...I think of Mary, and the great loss over her son, as she saw him hanging there...Beautiful, moving words!
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