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"Compliments of the Moon"

Dancing moonlight give me strength
My wings are getting weak
Sparkling star dust fills the air
Your magical mystique

When darkness falls such beauty
Fills the evening shades of grey
Enchanted little fairies clad
In garment sweet array

My strength is in the moonbeams
Stars will come to light the way
All is calm, and now renewed
Long before the break of day

So rest now weary souls of men
The sun will rise but soon
And your new day, will be refreshed
Compliments of the Moon!






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  • LoveSpell-PurpleRose silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Very Touching !

    I like the way that you mentioned all about the Fairy's as well as the moon.Dancingmoonlight give me strength,My wing's are getting weak, Sparkling moondust fills the air, your magical mystique. These are my favorite words as well as I like your title:

    " Complements Of The Moon " Good Luck In the contest ! Blessed be to You ! Brenda Gae


    • Dena62265
      August 29, 2008
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      Thanks so much for taking the time to read, and I am so very glad you liked it. Take Care
      Dena


  • owlish
    August 24, 2008

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    Sweet rhyme. I love the title. That and the first stanza hooked me. The first stanza has got to be my favorite. Even though I too have entered this contest, I hope you win a nice, shiny trophy.


    • Dena62265
      August 29, 2008
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      Awwww...thank you, you always have such kind words. I hope you win, as well. Thanks so much for reading.
      Dena


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    August 24, 2008

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    Oh Wow! I loved each & every word you have penned here. The flow of this was right on it. I read it twice. I started to feel like I was aching for the beach to walk under the full moon & dance & just feel free to be me in my own enchanted fairytale. Thank you for entering the contest & good luck! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


    • Dena62265
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the gold! I really appreciate it and your comments. Thanks again,
      Dena


    • Dena62265
      August 24, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the luck to, I think I may need it.
      Hugs,
      Dena

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