-I. I'm being swallowed whole;
One by One until the sky
Engulfs me in
Sunsets and Seagulls.
I. Day breaks,
[But my heart doesn't.]
And I'm rising with the
Sun rise.
Fairytales could only
Chain themselves to my
H e a r t for so long,
Until I found my own
Glass Slipper to lose.
II. My Fairy Godmother always told me,
"If you're not back by midnight,
this will all turn into nothing,"
But she didn't ever tell me that
It was all nothing to begin with.
Your kisses create my smile.
& Your face is like sunshine,
Casting a sparkle-glow
on the very tip of my nose.
When my eyes shut,
I'm tasting your words
and I'm imaging your face.
Your breath is tumbling off of my skin,
And your hope is holding onto my hands.
III. Space is spinning towards me,
Stars and Satellites,
Moons and Galaxies.
They're important;
But not as important as you.
I scribble X's and O's onto my skin,
Vowing to never forget these
Feelings.
My imagination is shedding
Like a second layer,
And your whispers were the soundtrack of
my summer.
You need rain to have a rainbow,
But Darling, you're my sunshine.
-I. Back to the beginning,
and I find myself in the same
Situation as before.
[Lost somewhere in the wrong time,
11:11's already passed and won.]
Finding myself with no words,
[But a pile of kisses.]
I can only think of three things
Important enough to think.
"I Love You."
"I Love You."
"I Love You."
Author notes
Inspired by the photo:
http://emsvangoth.deviantart.com/art/time-stops-39812979 .
It made me think of fairytales.
Like Cinderella and her Prince's wedding.
So I sort of went off of that.
I might change this so I like it more,
but probably won't because I'm too lazy. >.>
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amazing. <3 good luck!
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'I. Day breaks,
[But my heart doesn't.]
And I'm rising with the
Sun rise. "
Instead of using 'rise twice' maybe it should be 'rising with the sun'
because it kinda sounds repetitive.
Anywhore,
""If you're not back by midnight,
this will all turn into nothing,"
But she didn't ever tell me that
It was all nothing to begin with."
That was my favorite part.
I love that.
It's amazing
but no where near amazing
as you <333
Love you lots. -
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I usually hate repetition like that,
But I put that one there on purpose.
I wanted the connection...
Anyhow.
<3
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Annnndd, I know you're gay for me. ;D
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But I'll warn you, it sucks.
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Kay. Done.
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