The dripping of the water is the one and only thing i hear now.
My life is falling short and the whole entire world seems so empty of happiness.
I have been picked up and dropped to many times and i just fall right back down.
I leave nothing behind as i wither away, besides my sorrow and pain.
I look and see shimmering lights in the distance, I think of them as the happiness
I have never grasped into my hands and felt
For I only hear the faint dripping of the water.
Are these my tears, is it the rain,
What is it that i hear as i wither away.
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Comments
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Fine emotions penned with skill...
I like the way your feelings went into this write with sincere imagery that makes the reader feel real empathy. 
Melodies 
'lo Corey!
How's school???
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