Laying here beside you
your skin touching mine
the sky so clear this gorgeous night
stars as far as the eyes can see
your hand enfolds mine,
and magic is felt, with touch
no words are spoken
the only sound is two beating hearts
I wonder from time to time
if I dare to live a dream
or could it be I died one night
and in heaven we'll meet
I'm scared to go to sleep at night
afraid you might disappear from me
My faith leads me to believe
that we are meant to be
We talked for ever it seems
laugh and even dropped a tear
many stories were shared
secrets and dreams unfold
We told each other what we,
hope tomorrow will bring
I see clearly the love you hold for me
it is in everything you do each day
You have taken me on a natural high and,
if you'll have me, I plan on loving you even beyond
my final breath
Tonight we took another step
and made plans for all the days to come.
Holding your hand for the rest of my life,
is a must, I wouldn't have it any other way
I see in your eyes my reflection and the smile
I put on you face
Please know in return, you do the same for me
and even so much more
As the song goes, that I sing to you every
chance I get
" you're the only other half that makes me whole "
I love you beyond words
I hope you know ~~~
Author notes
For Someone very Special
You are giving me the time of my life
Loveandblessings2u
A contest entry
- Write What You Will! by limechic.
725 points, ended September 1, 2008, 62 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why are you crying, sweetheart? by Red Rocket.
1000 points, ended September 7, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that really WOWed me!!! the imagery makes the poems sooo alive!!!! and the poem is really filled with emotion!!!! good luck!!!
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Beautiful write
Deserved a gold for where there is love such as this life is so complete
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Excellent
It pleases me so much
to see you have your dreame
I wish this for all I love... always
Your words are just beautiful my friend
Love Rick
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Awww :]]] This nearly brought tears to my eyes. It's nice to see that someone is in a nice & healthy relationship. Congrats to you & the very lucky person
Usually, nowadays all anyone can write about is heartache & pain, because there seems to be no more love in the world. Wonderfully & beautifully penned. I also really love your background. Thank you for entering & I wish you the best of luck ! ♥
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Twinsy,
This is just as beautiful as it can be! What a wonderful job you did on this one! There is no other word for it! I love this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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This is very romantic... How can i find good enough words to explain to you the effect it brought...
I just finished it with a tear and a smile...
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*sigh*...this is so sweet...such romantic phrases. You're obviously very in love with him...don't let it go
Great job, good luck in the contest! -
Great Poem. Hang on to this feeling as long as possible. I felt the same way but didn't show it enough and it has cost me. Don't let that happen to your love.
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Oh My, This is just so pretty.
Beautiful words of love.
I only dream of feeling these type
of feelings.
You are truly blessed to have a love
such as this.
" you're the only other half that makes me hold "
I really love that line
Awww to love beyond words,
I bet he does know.
Your soft and tender words go so well
with the background.
You have done such a wonderful job on this piece.
Justgot2loveme
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Love is grand!
The feelings you are feeling are the best you will find. Cherish them for as long as you can. I hope they last for eternity. You are one of the best people I know and you deserve these feelings. This is a great testament of love and I really enjoyed the journey you took me on here. Someone is a lucky man! We are all lucky to witness your love in words. Love and kisses, Bubba
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