Tired of days' chores
I lie in the dark
watching the sky up above.
I feel dazed, I feel cold.
I feel my mothers arms around me.
The warmth takes me to my fantasy world.
I am my mothers angel,
free to do whatever I wish.
Laugh Dance and fly high
with no strings tied to keep me down.
To tell me what to do and what not.
No one to say you are wrong.
I float in the sky
with the moon
the stars follow me
everyone loves me here.
Suddenly a bright light comes from nowhere.
I know its time to go
to the unreal world again.
But I wake up with a smile on my face
as I now the night will come again.
Author notes
Picture inspired
A contest entry
- Picture prompt tell me what you see! by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended September 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely work here
You are a very good poet and I shall read more of your work for I am from Texas and I so believe as you do that their is only one God and we all are held within his love and grace
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Thank you so much for the appreciation. I am not a great writer but I like to express in poetry. I feel everyone has a past and some sadness but if you just keep on thinking about that you will miss all the beautiful opportunities life brings to us. Life is always as we want it to be and always the way we see it. After all EVERY COIN DO HAS TWO SIDES!
Take care and God bless...
--peru.
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Awesome! I really like the way you took this picture & ran with it. It was a true fairy tale. I felt a lot of pain in this. Like she was running from something, & not really wanting to come back. Which was a great response again to the picture. "the stars follow me everyone loves me here." That is really beautiful sadness! Thank you for sharing & entering my contest! Excellent write. In Love & Light... Blessed Be!
~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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