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Serenade of the Blade

Sing a love song for a blade
whose cold touch I crave
(more than yours)

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Short is hard.

But I tried.

A contest entry

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  • Topnotchsy
    October 19, 2008

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    This is pretty powerful. Really paints an emotional picture. Hope if you are feeling this way you start to feel better, but you clearly have talent for writing. Congrats on the gold for this piece, best of luck in future contests.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    those dang dashing men!!!! Very good!


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    August 24, 2008

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    Hmm... While the title was a little awkward, I did quite like your poem. It was creepy, in a very subtle way indeed! Well done, and good luck!