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Mz. Lonely

As I walk through the room, she pounces,
Mz. Lonely, struttin’ her stuff
Thoughtlessness one moment,
Despair the next
She perched on the picture, she did,
she waited
Deadly devouress of contentment
There is never happiness,
but at least there was contentment
God, I miss being “us”

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  • funpum
    January 3
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    I could read this two ways... brilliant, I really love it.


  • Amanda K. Martin
    December 14, 2008
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    lawl Curt, you do have real emotion.

    haha.

    I like this though,


  • Solidified
    August 24, 2008

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    ooh I like this, different style for you. Very capturing though. I'm glad you're putting poetry up here again.


    • Curtkf
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you sweet

      Maybe a little motivation from you, and a swift kick in the rear from others. I'm glad you enjoyed it.