Crinkled sheets cross bed-frames
made to sprawl and stretch; I'll
share the comfort with you if you
let the clocks stop ticking.
Longer days and more pleasurable habits
form to display affection's secrets
under silken ivory blankets...
Catch the breath on silver tongues
before the afternoon arrives- slowly
mornings sound in distant seconds, but
I ignore them as I clutch your hands.
Pant softly under sun-dust and discover
love
Author notes
Photo cred: My favourite game by *VladimirBorowicz
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- Reserve quickly! by She Stole My Voice.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The desire to let time stop... a universal feeling. How I wish it were that easy to make it happen
Love,
Stacy
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This is incredible. The description in it just blows my mind.
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share the comfort with you if you
let the clocks stop ticking.
nice write!
good luck
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Woah,
you definitely set the bar for this contest.
My favorite part is:
" I'll
share the comfort with you if you
let the clocks stop ticking.
Longer days and more pleasurable habits
form to display affection's secrets "
It's amazing.
Thank you so much for entering ♥
-Rainbow. -
http://vladimirborowicz.deviantart.com/art/My-favourite-game-53361696
there's your picture :]
Tell me when you're finish so I can come back and comment.
Also, if you need a change of picture, please tell me, as long as it's a vaild excuse, like it's not appropriate for your age.
Thank you and good luck ♥
-Rainbow.
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