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Color

Color of the darkest night,
my room devoid of any light,
the deepest pit, the roughest sea,
the hollow edges inside of me,
co-mingled, darkly bold,
you have the color of my soul.




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  • Bitter Irony
    August 24, 2008

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    Great rhyme, and good use of concise imagery. I'm guessing your color is black.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony