Pretending you were with me was the easiest part
especially when I walked in the fields
that smelled like your perfume.
But when the time came to hold you,
whisper to you, kiss you
you were no longer in my arms.
You were gone from my world;
my beautiful disaster
with jet-black raven hair
and emerald-green eyes
with no will to live.
Not even for me.
I loved you,
and you left me walking alone
in the meadows of despair,
the deserts of failed hopes
and the ruins of lost love.
I was alone.
I would hold your ghostly shadow hand
when I felt your presence near me.
But I still wondered
if you loved me
then why’d you have to go.
After all, the cotton-ball clouds are too far to reach
even if my heartstrings are connected to yours.
I still remember the taste of your lips,
and your cute jingly laugh that always made me smile.
I’ll never forget you, love.
Even if you’re gone
you’re still here
in my heart.
Author notes
thunder.xx.paradise
inspired by picture 
its a cute pic, hopefully i did it good justice.
i wrote about this dude whos girlfriend committed suicide and he still loves her and hopes that her ghost will haunt him forever.. which is cute in a kinda creepy way hhaha
anyways enjoy :]
constructive criticism is always wanted 
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hahah I wouldn't have gotten it unless I read the AN
but they tied it together nicely.
loved:
I would hold your ghostly shadow hand
when I felt your presence near me.
But I still wondered
if you loved me
then why’d you have to go.
After all, the cotton-ball clouds are too far to reach
even if my heartstrings are connected to yours.
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"But when the time came to hold you,
whisper to you, kiss you
you were no longer in my arms."
Aw :[
You told me that it sucked
and guess what?
it didn't!
Liar, haha.
It's freaking amazing.
<333
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well i like some parts
and now that i'm rereading it its not all that bad
but still mehhh
yaaay at least someone here thinks its good♥
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oh btw.. is the pic of a guy? cause then i have to write it from his point of view
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yes it is :]
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well i have a decent idea for it
hopefully ill be able to write it out properly
my writing has been kinda not as good as i would like lately.. -
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Chh whatever!
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well.. i'm done
dunno how good it is :S
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i might start write tonight
but i just saw a really scary movie so im kinda not in the mood lmfao im all paranoid and stuff haha -
ooh thats gonna be kinda tough ill do my best
ill try to have it done by tmrw or monday
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