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A Color With Warning

Sky has shades of this in the early morning,
waking to a new day my usual yawning
Peeking through the curtains dawn gives a warning.

Clouds are drifting as sky looks like its on fire.
When you write of this color always inspires
As it brings out the passion, set my muse higher.

On a cold day little ones come in with their cheeks,
when their sick you never want temperature to peak
Cold or hot this is my favorite color and very unique.

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  • Bitter Irony
    August 24, 2008

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    Great imagery! I especially like the second stanza. I'm guessing your color is red.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony


  • Perception
    August 24, 2008

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    I like the imagery in this poem; very strong, and really out there. It really puts a great image in your head. Perfect really.

    Great job


  • toomysterious
    August 23, 2008
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    Very pretty poem. You've picked a pretty color, too.