As I listen to the River
Singing ever so softly to me
I see a Rainbow in the sky
Smiling so wide and free
I remember the beauty in the eyes
Of the love I'm longing for
I long to feel her arms around me
Hear her tell me "It's you I adore
Who is that calling my name
It sounds like the love of my life
Yes it's her calling me back
She agreed to be my wife
A contest entry
- This is a verse prompt. by Topaze.
1750 points, ended September 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Touchingly, feelingly nice.
rissa
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Thank you rissa
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A lovely piece with nice flow and very touching. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.
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Humm..just beautiful and heartwarming thought and the move of the sentiments ..I love it..well done..thanks for sharing...
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Thank you my friend, I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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A quiet chat by the river
wow what comfort this can bring one to ease the load of a day...mac
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Thanks Mac. Glad you enjoyed it.
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