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~Listen~ for apples fell

~Listen~
8-23-08


  Listen
I can almost hear your voice
the words on each one of
his page are so very clear
he makes you wonder
he has a surprise
around every corner
  Listen
he opens your eyes
so you can see his world
he opens your heart
so he can take your every last breath
words of perfection
if you
  Listen
you can endure the pain,
the love, smiles, laughter, and
thee cries...
his words will jump at you~
if it were a snake
it would have already bit you!
his words will swallow you whole
poison you
inject you with his thoughts

if you listen you can almost hear his voice

Author notes

Another poem for appels fell!!!
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  • LadyLuff
    September 2, 2008
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    wow this is an awesome poem


  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 25, 2008

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    Wow, that was beautiful. I just realized it is a person on here you speak of so I shall have to take a peak myself.

    Hugs and kisses,
    vampi


  • apples fell
    August 23, 2008

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    You really need to stop spoiling me...LOL. It's wonderful that you are writing so many poems about me...But you don't have to do that hun. I am just so glad my words touch you on some level and my poetry makes you think and reflect and possibly connect with. Thank you babes for another wonderful dedication. That's very sweet of you. It's nice to think someone holds me and my poetry in such high regards. You are wonderful yourself.