am I insane?
can you here me screaming?
do you see[smell] the rotting flesh?
are you almost done?
do you think my words are lacking?
...maybe some sort of fairy dust?
lover, do i need you?
I bet... not?
Author notes
question prompt
and let me tell you i as all those questions
everyday
i do need fairy dust...
A contest entry
- 36 Options Contest! by chasingwhiterabbits.
700 points, ended September 3, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hm...Now this is interesting and weird. The good kind of weird. I love the lines,
"do you think my words are lacking?
...maybe some sort of fairy dust?"
Very interesting. Unique questions. Good write.
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Awsome
Are you of the undead ? Here to play tricks on me from the grave. AWWWWWWWW! JK This is very good1 It's okay to be lacking that magic. Magic isn't real. But you know these dark depressing writes are not nothing . Or even just ramblings their coming from your minds subconscious. -
Wonderfully written, love. I relate so well. Every word was completely flawless. I especially loved:
-can you here me screaming?
do you see[smell] the rotting flesh?
are you almost done?
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beautifully put. much love & best of luck to you in that contest ♥
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short but sweet! u are a very good poet!
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This is intense. I'm sorry you feel this way hun. Good luck, in the contest and in life.
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thank you!
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i think you can do alot better
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maybe
but im slowly falling apart
the muse is there just not wiling to make the right works string together
i didnt think it was all bad
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your not insane baby
=)
this is really good
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omg this was so intense
it was as if the questions were stabbing me in the heart. meaning it was very emotional and well written ahah
i really like this. its sad in an angry way
i ask myself those questions often also
best of luck in the contest this is really good!
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aww thank you
see sis
you are amazing
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