Free, I am free
Now the world can see
Nature smiles to me
A flower is what I be
A clown fish in the sea
The honey of a bee
I am a fruitful tree
I'm an everlasting guest
A spring that will last
A storm that ends at last
A cloud withdrawing fast
Animals building nests
The weather of the west
The finest and the best
Free, I am free
To nature I flee
My life smile to me
I fulfilled my dream
And I dance happily
No one can ever be
Happier than me
A contest entry
- Reserve quickly! by She Stole My Voice.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 14 entries
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I love this write
So light and playful and yes indeed there is no better feeling than being free
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Freedom is both exciting and dangerous.
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I'm an everlasting guest
A spring that will last
A storm that ends at last
A cloud withdrawing fast
nice images
good luck! -
Great uplifting beat and feel good rhythm to this wonderfully worded write. It rhymes well and flows devinely and it lifted my mood and brought a smile. Best of luck !!
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Thank you!
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Woah, that was like a rhyming orgasm right there, haha.
but it was fantastic.
Usually, I absolutely hate poetry that rhymes, but I really like this one.
Thank you so much for entering and good luck ♥
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Wow!
It was so difficult to write a happy poem! I don't know I think it's silly!!! anyway I hope it's good enough for a premiere... -
http://larafairie.deviantart.com/art/Free-Spirit-76796203
Tell me when you finish the piece,
so I can come back and comment :]
Good luck!
-Rainbow.
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