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Skin

you glow,
and i take my daily dose
of your expression
silent in repression
wordlessly revealing
effortlessly speaking,
with every sway of hip
and every eyelash flick you taunt,
and tease your way across my verse
your very skin it flirts
and draws me in like siren's calling
as my words are ever falling
dropping down around your form
lying softly to adorn the path you tread
as you sidle through my head

Author notes

This one was written for mari's competition (http://allpoetry.com/contest/2397025) but I entered a different write instead (http://allpoetry.com/poem/4058259) so it could be said that the two poems are twinned. The other poem was more in keeping with the aim of the competition but this one is much more my usual style and flow and I feel a lot more comfortable with it than I do the other.

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    And this one is delightful sensual!
    Oh, I loved this skin, both are very good, but this one...can I say I like it little more?

    • Glitch
      September 4, 2008
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      haha, of course you can, I prefer this one but felt that the other one fit the contest guidelines better. This one is much more ME though so I prefer it. Thanks for liking it too!