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Raptured, The Beginning

I have been captured
in a blink of an eye.
I look up, shouting victory

my tears now fully dry
as the hosts of Heaven  pass by.

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  • dustookie2
    February 27
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  • Carly Pop gold member
    August 26, 2008
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    excellent, loved it!!!!!!!!!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    Amen!!!!

    What a glorious and happy day that will be for many but at the same time, the choas and evil of the tribulation becomes a reality for many and many will not heed the call and will take the mark of the beast...But for those who are ready , one word GLORY!!!! Thanks for sharing this little inspiring piece of poetry David!!!~~~Toni~~