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What A Hue!

A splender it is to be this shade,
A feminine color is what I have made,

Royalty has worn this hue,
A primary color thats beautiful to view,

A part of an artists pallet and pitch,
When I see this color I enjoy its beauty that is rich,

My favorite flower is colored this way,
And smells so good it relaxes me for the whole day!




A contest entry

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  • Molassis
    August 25, 2008
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    You must be talking about purple? It's my favorite color!

    You did a nice job with the rhymes in this! It's simple and easy to read but gives a hint of mystery. You did a good job describing or showing the color instead of just naming it... very good!

    Nice to see new poets here... I do hope that you enjoy it!

    ~Melissa


  • Bitter Irony
    August 24, 2008

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    Great riddle format! I love rhyming couplets. I'm guessing your color is purple, my personal favorite.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony


  • toomysterious
    August 23, 2008
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    Light-hearted and enjoyable and one of my favorite colors, too. Good luck in this contest.