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My Favorite Color

My favorite color is very bright
It flatters me because of my dark hair
It really stands out in the dark night
I wear a gold pin on my jacket for flair

Fire engines don't have a thing on me
Wearing my favorite color I'd blend in fine
You don't have to have good vision to see
My outfit would make you stop on a dime

This is my favorite color of lollipops
It leaves it's color all around my lips
When finished I do the bunny hop, hop
So it doesn't add inches to my hips

My favorite color has stripes in our Flag
I always see it wherever I go
Wearing this color, I don't like to brag
But it leaves me tinkling and all aglow

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Poetry Charades Contest: Color

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  • Bitter Irony
    August 24, 2008

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    Nice use of rhyme and meter! My favorite stanza is the one about the lollipops. :-) I'm guessing your color is red!

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony


  • toomysterious
    August 23, 2008
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    Good color choice, nice rhyme and flow. Good luck.