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My Favourite Colour

My favourite colour
is without any colour.

With nothing
it says everthing.

Some say it is for purity
others say simplicity.

It is a ray of wish,
yes it is colour of peace.

 

Its completely away from all mess.

I hope you are ready to guess.

A contest entry

I guess you can guess which colour it is...

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  • Bitter Irony
    August 24, 2008

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    Great use of riddle format! I'm guessing your color is white.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony


  • toomysterious
    August 23, 2008
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    Very descriptive. Good luck.


  • Princess-nee
    August 23, 2008

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    Um can I guess what your favorite color is???
    is it white the color of purity..Plus nice write..its good to see you back on AP once again

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Indeed I can guess which colour you are trying to impress upon the page, your colour is without the first traffic light of rage, 'tis the colour of the page with which we write the purity of a poetic plea.

    I like the presentation of couplet form, it's tight, held close to the heart, Bravo.