When love is right
It affects us in the most profound way
Love is more than thoughts, words, and feelings.
It’s a reflection of all of whom you are
Deep inside.
When I say I love you
I am saying how much
I value and treasure
Everything about you.
And how my soul aches
With desire and passion
To have you.
Love is the most beautiful way
I can give you joy, excitement and passion
And receive it from you in return.
Isn’t it wonderful that we can express love
In so many ways.
Love is a glance, a touch, a word, a kiss
And you and I sharing, touching
Exploring and delighting.
When I hear your voice on the phone
It’s a melody
That gently pierces the deepest part of me
Your laughter delights me
And makes me feel like a kid again.
When I look at you
It’s as if someone
Gave me the most beautiful and precious gift
Wrapped with love.
And there will be a time
When the right moment comes
And you and I are so deeply in love
That we will give ourselves to each other
With total abandon
And make love.
Making love with you
Is much more than physical pleasure
And yet it’s a delightful way
To express love.
I want the first time
We’re in each others arms
To be as perfect as can be.
When I close my eyes
And imagine what it would be like
Here’s what I see.
I see a woman who is exquisitely sexy
And each part of you is not only beautiful
But so desirable.
I can’t help but to look at every curve of your mouth
And how delectable your kisses would be.
I imagine you with your head on my chest
And your body glistening in the moonlight
As it dances across your nakedness.
I can almost envy the moon
Having the freedom to playfully touch your skin
But then
You turn your head and look at me
And your eyes glisten and twinkle in pure delight.
It’s when you look at me this way
I feel we have connected inside,
And I can’t wait to take the journey of love
From the tip of your head
To the taste of your toes.
I can’t tell you enough
How much your beauty
Arouses me.
When I touch your lips with mine
I want you to feel
As though you’re a teenage girl
Falling in love for the first time.
And I hope I never miss a single kiss.
Now, you are all undressed
As your nipples appear with their cherry-ripe tips
And your beautiful naked body astounds me.
I almost feel faint
As my blood rushes and my breath almost stops.
I like my body when it’s with yours
As I draw you ever so close to me,
And I dream of how your soft warm breasts
Will brush up against me
As you passionately kiss me
Sweet, warm and wet.
I can feel the velvety soft skin
Of your body
As I massage every part of you
Ever so lovingly
And yet exciting you
In wondrous ways.
I love it when I hear you softly moan
As my lips travels from the nape of your neck
To the loveliness
Between your splendid supple thighs
And my lips and tongue kisses you there
In your heavenly moisture
In such a way
That you shake and quiver
And move your hips
In harmony with my mouth.
I want to titillate you
Delight you
And so excite you
As I want your body to be totally mine.
My heart races so fast
Thinking how I desire to be inside you
And when I enter you
It will be ever so gentle
Soft and slow
With mingling pleasure.
I want to feel you
Yet have you feel me,
With no hurry, so we can allow
Every sense of us
To feel and discover
Delight and pleasure
Of each other
As my lips conquers yours
And they obey.
My hands glide all over your body
And you respond to my every caress
As I embrace you
And you pull me deeper inside you
To feel your sweet ecstasy
And total moment of pleasure
But the best part of all
Is everyday I live is another day to love you
And I don’t ever want to be without you in my arms.
A contest entry
- erotic lust or making love by Blissfullhatred.
800 points, ended August 24, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sensuality at its best
Again another worthy gold.
I love this poem. so much passion and so beautifully written
Thank you
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this is beautiful... thank you so much


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Beautiful write...so soft...loving...and it is true. To make love...real psssionate love to the one special person is your love is the truest most satisfying and soul-fulfilling feeeling in the world...and now I forever dream and imagine of making love to her...the one I love with all of my being...
I feel the emotion in this...you've touched my heart.


