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Yellow Bloom

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Crept upon the pavement
Lonely and bewildered

The beauty of my blossom
Made people sigh with tenderness
I rise with strength and color

Weathered with the heat
I hold my stem up high
Embraced with my shiny leafs

I can resist the worst of life
And absorb the best of earth
Growing in the gutters of the world

Crept upon the pavement
Lonely and bewildered


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  • Map Of Stars gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    Very lovely, and this sends such a strong message of 'will'. Standing out from your surroundings can be tough, what strenght this little bud has
    I like this poem a lot, you did well with the picture prompt, and I wish you all the best of luck in the contest!

    Amber


  • Walk-Free
    August 23, 2008
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    loved the imagery in this write.

    thank you so much for this short, but deep poem.