The flowers
are the happiest around
they grow fast
out of the ground
they don't make a sound
The birds sing
as the cat says
he is king
as he chases things
Kids laugh at loud
the clowns are proud
showing of their new trick
that they do with a stick
Everyone smiles
for lots of miles
that makes me glad
that no one is sad
A contest entry
- Rhyme Town by Slick99.
675 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It is amazing when you can see all these people around us and know they are happy, huh? I love seeing others smile. Making them happy makes me happy. You have great talent. Keep writing
Congrats on the Silver ^_^
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Rhyme town is a happy town!!!
This is very cute Genna.
Congratulations on the Silver!
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Rhyme town IS happy town isn't it?
ha ha ha --- this was cute
Good luck in the contest . . . so far you are my favorite and I hope you win gold! -
Cute poem!
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This sounds like a wonderful town! Nicely rhymed. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Very nice sunshine. Wouldn't it be nice if all towns in the world were like this one you describe? Obviously your heart went into this poem and I feel it as I read this. Thank you for sharing it honey; the best of luck to you. I love you.
Your Daddy -
You are amazing for eight years old! Cute, sweet, and contagiously happy! Best of luck in the contest!
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Very nicely done! What a happy theme, and well penned too!
faith
Best in the contest!
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I think that this is a sweet poem that you have done we all like to be happy thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest much love always
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Love your poem,but I think that the line 'showing of' is not right,shouldnt it be 'showing off'?Not a big mistake and I'm not even sure,but I think you should correct if it is.Awesome poem.
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Delightful
Wonderful job!
Great rhyme and flow
I love the last verse...
"Everyone smiles
for lots of miles
that makes me glad
that no one is sad"
Yeah..."No one is sad"
Soooooooo much fun
I want to be in Rhyme Town
Wish you the best in the contest
David
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I love it! Cheerful and great images of people and nature all around us, if we'll just stop and take notice! Good rhyme!
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great job genna! ^_^
love the rhyming theme u used! u definitley should win the gold! 5 stars! -
aw, such a sweet poem. it makes me happy. =D good luck in the contest!
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awww this is awesome sweety, i adored reading it, good luck and take care
love you
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this is really awesome and great!!! good luck in my contest, and have a nice day!!! -slick99
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