her skin entices the wolf
the scent of her blood drives vampires insane
her soul calls to demons
yet to have her they must die
she herself is in part all
yet fear and hatred drive her to kill
in her dance with a vampire
neither is predator
she lets him seduce her
and in an embrace
she lays the blade between his ribs
as the wolf hunts
she is hunted
step for step they run
the wolf stops as she see's the boy
and just before she strikes
the knife meets her neck
the slayer waits for the demons
as they slither under the doorway
she drinks the vampires blood
as shadows they creep behind her
she can see there eyes
and in one moment they both move
her blessed cutter finds his mind
she prays that with their lives
she can be made whole
an angle once more
what she doesn't know
she is worse than they
evil fears her not for her goodness
but for the darkness in her soul
she is the mother of hell
her children are her victims
her husband in control of her and them
she is the first fallen angle
striving for heaven once more
A contest entry
- . . .the blood of a thousand demons...I FINALLY GOT IT POSTED!!! by JinSays.
300 points, ended August 24, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is sweet
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as the wolf hunts
she is hunted
step for step they run
the wolf stops as she see's the boy
and just before she strikes
the knife meets her neck
wow, that was kind of hot!
Yes, this poem could use a fine tuning, the story is really good, and I loved some of the props you used, very nice.
However, this is a poetry contest, and spelling counts.
Thank you for entering and best wishes to you,
Jin -
You have expanded on your story and done a very good job of it at that, only one thing now, 2nd line 2nd word should be 'scent." Great job with the prompt, good luck in the contest.
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Interesting poem, but you would do well to use spell check. Too many errors.
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